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M. de Mooij Member Joined in March 2015 Posts: 13 |
Posted 31 May 2015 - 20:58 CET |
Plane is unsharp |
Adam Myszkowski Member Joined in June 2011 Posts: 3 |
Posted 31 May 2015 - 22:25 CET |
Still not sharp and soft, I'm afraid you can't help this particular photo at all |
Victor Ambriz Member Joined in August 2013 Posts: 52 |
Posted 1 June 2015 - 18:31 CET |
I'm not a screener but I'm agree with Adam and M.R. The aircraft is not sharp try to use a higher F next time
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Darryl Morrell Full member Joined in August 2008 Posts: 143 |
Posted 1 June 2015 - 21:50 CET |
Too much sky also, the aircraft needs to be more central vertically in the frame, the composition looks odd as its at the bottom. Takes a while to pick up but you will get there :-) |
Nasser Abdillahi Member Joined in September 2014 Posts: 3 |
Posted 1 June 2015 - 22:40 CET |
Not the final edited but on the way. Adetande, the aircraft needs to be more central vertically in the frame and it's definitely unsharp .. he are a try from me but you must know its NOT the final editing you most work on it self .. Attached photos: |
Philipp Wittmann Member Joined in August 2012 Posts: 4 |
Posted 1 June 2015 - 23:33 CET |
Imho there's no need to have the airplane exactly in the middle of the picture. It's much more important to get a good looking overall composition - and that doesn't necessarily involve measuring pixels to center the plane.
I do think this image has potential, except for the sharpness...not sure how the original looked, the gradient in the sky is definitely nice, but I guess it never was fully sharp in the first place. |
Andre Nordheim Full member Joined in September 2013 Posts: 184 |
Posted 9 June 2015 - 18:50 CET |
Adetandy, send me an email to sanordheim@gmail.com with a list of your equipment, settings you shoot at and the software you use for post processing. Also include the original of the shot you posted above. |
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