Is this better? BAW A380

My old photo was rejected because of some dust spots & contrast halos around the fuselage. Do you think this will be any better?

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Hello i shall just point out im not a screener:

But upon looking at your image i feel you have many things to sort out on the Wing & Tail you have jaggy's the edge's are not smooth and stepped. The engine look soft smooth no detail. plus the sun effect starts in the top corner but the sun look's to be hiding behind the clouds & it's too dark just understand the true color's please feel free to drop me a email with your image @ crossley04@gmail.com

Keep trying don't give up and please follow some great editing flows on Youtube.

Andre https://www.youtube.com/user/NAX737NOLSim/videos

Angelo https://www.youtube.com/user/MMP757/videos

I have highlighted the main issue this image present's..

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